you friend has been offerd a place on a course a the university where you studied. He would like your advice about a place to live.

#friend #offerd #place #course #university #advice

Dear Ana, It was nice to hear

Correct your spelling

from

show examples

form

Correct your spelling

from

show examples

you. I am so happy that you start

your

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

college

September. About

this

time the weather is more

confy

Correct your spelling

comfy

However

Add a comma

,However

show examples

to find

Change the verb form

finding

show examples

a place to settle is a bit

challenge

Change the form of the verb

challenging

show examples

. But I am sure that I can help you with some tips.

First

off all I will assume that you do not have

such

a big budget and in that

case

Add a comma

,case

show examples

I recommend that you want to stay

near

Correct your spelling

nearby

show examples

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the University as I did. The suburb

that

Correct word choice

where

show examples

I lived

called

Add a missing verb

is called

show examples

Nepean and it will take about 5 min

Change preposition

show examples

walk to the main student´s build.

Fortunetly

Correct your spelling

Fortunately

I could afford an

apartament

Correct your spelling

apartment

with one bedroom, it was a

kind

Correct your spelling

kinda

show examples

Correct your spelling

show examples

studio

Correct your spelling

which

show examples

wich

Correct your spelling

which

show examples

cost

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

1.000/

mounth

Correct your spelling

month

. Just google Nepean´s Studio Block and you will see the same

tipe

Correct your spelling

time

type

that I rented.

Although

you can search by using google, there are some sites

that

Correct word choice

where

show examples

you

also

can look for

resonable

Correct your spelling

reasonable

places. I would say kiji.com or Rentals.com as well.

Then

just e-mail

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

landloard

Correct your spelling

landlord

and ask for a visitor. I might be available to go and check some spots if you wish. One

advice

Correct quantifier usage

piece of advice

show examples

that I must tell you

is do

Change the verb form

does

show examples

not even think to share a place with someone

who

Change the pronoun

whom

show examples

you don´t know well.

Besides

sounds a lot

Change preposition

apply

show examples

cheaper I had heard dangerous histories

abaout

Correct your spelling

about

stranger people who wants to get advance from

student

Add an article

the student

a student

show examples

For instance

, a friend of mine had all his

bellongins

Correct your spelling

belongings

stolen from a

Correct your spelling

roommate

show examples

room mate

Correct your spelling

roommate

show examples

. Don´t do that kind of mistake. I will be here if you need anything.

Also

, I am wondering if you want to be at my house during the

first month

Add a hyphen

first-month

show examples

wich

Correct your spelling

which

show examples

can contribute to

Correct article usage

the search

show examples

Change preposition

apply

show examples

yourself. Best wishes, Gabriela

Submitted by gabimaria.nut on Mon May 30 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
39Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

289 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
Some children spend every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Modern children's minds have been exposed to additional technological pressure over the last decade, especially with mobile phones. There are different points of view on the issue. Some believe that the pros greatly outweigh the drawbacks. Despite the potential benefits, it is agreed that spending so much time with smartphones tends to be a negative development. This essay will shed some light on the main reasons for phones' popularity and provide examples to support the thesis.
4.5
band
It is important for children to learn the differance between right or wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them with this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teaechers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern education, the children punishment have engaged the nation's interest. Some people believe that parents and teachers should tearch social rules to children at young age by using a strong and strict punishment. However, others might argue that the best way to teach children about social rules is scolding. In this essay, I will provide my opinion and address some punishment in this current topic.
4
band
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countriyside is decreasing. Do you think it is a positie or nagative development?
Migration has ben increased dramatically from the village to urban areas to around the world due to many reasons. Thus, in many nations, rural inhabitants ratio is diminished by this action. In this essay, I will determine both merits and demerits and clarify why it is a negative breakthroughs.
4
band
Write about the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that the music plays a very important role in a life to decrease the stress . I completely agree with the statement that it plays a vital role in human life by motivating an employees at workplace and music act like a therapy for most people.
5
band
Write about the following topic. Buying things online on the internet such as boo, air tickets and groceries is s becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages.
In today's contemporary era, purchasing items such as books, plane tickets and groceries online is gaining more popularity. In my point of view, the advantages of this phenomenon outweighs the disadvantages as it provides us the freedom of buying products anywhere, anytime.

you friend has been offerd a place on a course a the university where you studied. He would like your advice about a place to live.

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countriyside is decreasing. Do you think it is a positie or nagative development?

Write about the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write about the following topic. Buying things online on the internet such as boo, air tickets and groceries is s becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages.