In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, it has been a new habit for consuming dessert after the main course.

However

,

this

kind of meal with added sugar may cause some deadly diseases. Some folks argue that giving a higher price for sweet food could help to prevent

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. Personally, I disagree as it will probably not become a long-lasting habit as people do not have basic

knowledge

of

this

regulation

.

This

essay will elucidate more in

further

detail. On the one hand,

this

practice might make a huge change instantly. Societies will immediately stop buying cakes since they cannot afford them.

As a result

, we can see a dramatic decline in added sugar consumption. Because giving citizens a strict

regulation

could be more effective than doing some campaigns. As an illustration, toddlers will immediately eat vegetables if their parents promise them some new toys.

On the other hand

, without any basic

knowledge

, citizens might not understand the value of

this

regulation

. They might not comprehend that sugary products are unhealthy for their body system.

Consequently

, they could save up an amount of money merely for buying their favourite chocolates. Thence, health education is more needed to give a deep understanding of

this

statement.

For instance

, when people have been provided

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basic

knowledge

behind

this

rule, someday, when the authority has changed the

regulation

,

this

habit still continues.

For example

, the government has made numerous new frightening designs of cigarette packages to show the adverse effects,

nevertheless

, people are still consuming it, even though they have known the long-run effects. To conclude, a force

regulation

might offer immediate improvement.

Nevertheless

, educated societies could reduce the consumption of fizzy drinks because of their will.

Then

, when

this

regulation

no longer existed, the

knowledge

will stay in their minds.