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Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that we should divide
students
 based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all
students
 together. In the following paragraph, I will discuss both views and explain my opinion. On the one hand, In my country, there are two types of learning. The administrators in many schools classify all
students
 together for a reason as it will make smart
children
 help teach other
students
.
Moreover
, When I search for education systems in other countries, I found that these types will successful if poor-grade
students
 are willing to learn.
However
, In my secondary
school
 used
this
 system in grades 1-3 and was unsuccessful because Thailand socials have different types to take care of
children
. Some parents work all the time and do not attend to their
children
. It makes
children
 feel lonely. In the
school
, They were aggressive, disturbed and bully smart
children
 and bring smart
children
 the bad ways.
On the other hand
, dividing
students
 based on academic ability will make the teacher focus on a student in a true format.
Moreover
, The
school
 should know that
children
 have different talents. In my case, I prefer learning language and social studies and always have the best grade in a primary
school
 classroom.
However
, the Divide
students
 system in secondary
school
 was taken me to smart
children
 in the science and arithmetic room. Following that, It makes me very stressed and unhappy to learn. In conclusion, I firmly agree with schools should divide
students
 based on academic ability.
However
, In my country has a moral that a smart student needs to expert in science and mathematics only. Severely, It looks down on student who learns in art classroom which will bring failed education system.
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