The Australian government has a policy of turning back the boats of people who attempt to enter Australia illegally. There are people who believe that this is right, but others who think that this is wrong. Examine both sides of this issue and give your own opinion.
Illegal immigration is a problem
of
developed countries. In Australia, Change preposition
in
government
enforces illegal immigrants' ships to return to their origin. It is often claimed that Add an article
the government
this
is a policy to protect domestic citizens, while some deem that it is too harsh for refugees. The perspectives for both views are what we will be looking at in this
piece.
First
of all, people who agree
the restriction of illegal immigration believe that refugees may occupy a lot of social resources. Add the preposition
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For instance
, government
needs to provide houses to settle those people. It is no reason to accept illegal immigration without any support. Add an article
the government
Furthermore
, government
should provide public medical Add an article
the government
service
for them, even though it may raise the burden Fix the agreement mistake
services
of
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public
health system. Undeniably, Add an article
the public
government
has the responsibility to protect Add an article
the government
their
local residents.
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On the contrary
, some argue that government
should show the protection of human
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the human
a human
right
. In fact, No one wants to leave their home town permanently as long as they can survive at that place. People have to escape from their home Fix the agreement mistake
rights
country
because of many reasons, such
as wars, disease and political reasons. Supporting them can raise the national image of the country
. Moreover
, immigrants can contribute additional productivity to the
society. Since manpower is a kind of Correct article usage
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resources
for the Fix the agreement mistake
resource
country
as well, more labour can boost the economy. However
, it may cause other issue
, like imbalance Change the wording
another issue
other issues
supply
and demand Change preposition
in supply
of
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labour
market, underpaying Correct article usage
the labour
salary
and unreasonable working hours.
To sum up, allowing illegal immigrants may create Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
reputation
and bring extra workers Correct article usage
a reputation
for
the Change preposition
to
country
. Yet, they may spend Correct article usage
the resource
resource
of the nation. As far as I am concerned, Fix the agreement mistake
resources
government
should balance the merits and demerits of receiving refugeesAdd an article
the government
,
and make sure residents and citizens should have priority Remove the comma
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