In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Since humans are prone to violence, many shows breaking laws are growing drastically. In a lot of countries, crime books and TV dramas including offences are becoming more and more celebrities. In
this
essay, I will explore the reasons for the popularity of murder fiction and dramas and Linking Words
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explain why these publishments should be banned by authorities.
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attack
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attacks
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more Correct subject-verb agreement
are
than
in the past because of TV plays and killing fiction papers. Correct word choice
common than
Although
human nature can be merciful, most tend to be violent especially when they read or watch rudeness as a role model. Bullying encourages peoples' egos and triggers superiority unless they stop their behaviours. Linking Words
For example
, if pupils at the schools apply bullying and teachers allow or ignore it, nobody can stop these students Linking Words
to develop
their force.
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, there are some solutions Linking Words
government
can apply and Correct article usage
the government
then
they ensure that the severity could plummet. Linking Words
Firstly
, the government should ban and Linking Words
this
is the only reactive solution. Even if Linking Words
government
ban these shows and books, assault among people will not stop but I am sure it will decrease. we really know that these harmful contents increase the amount of crime though we need to reduce it. Correct article usage
the government
Secondly
, we can create proactive approaches including supporting Linking Words
well
education. Correct word choice
good
For instance
, people can learn useful information that they stay away from cruelty at school, Linking Words
therefore
, we are one step closer to our aim.
In conclusion, the popularity of TV shows and crime books goes up dramatically every day unless we interfere positively. Policymakers should forbid and put some limitations Linking Words
then
people should be educated in terms of how they protect their children and themselves against attack.Linking Words
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Task Response
Clarify the position on crime fiction and TV crime dramas. Provide specific reasons for the opinions stated.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the logical structure of the essay. Use clear topic sentences and ensure that each paragraph presents a coherent idea.