In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching a large number of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In the modern era, teaching styles have changed significantly

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ago. Some people argue that tutors were no longer to teach a large number of

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,due to the advent of technology, online platforms are provided

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of teaching. In

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of the

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and

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matter.

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teaching platform is cheaper and there is no

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time schedule. Nowadays, people don't need to attend

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a class unless they are living in rural and remote areas. In the past, they must

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far from the areas in order to attend

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school and university. Due to the advent of technology, everyone can learn their education at their home because a tutor can teach via

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platform whether you are travelling.

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, the cost is extremely cheap so everyone can afford to learn it rather than a traditional teaching method.

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, a traditional teaching method is more expensive than online learning.

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, there is an advantage

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learning face to face because

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can contact

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tutors.

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, if they have a problem or they don't understand about lectures while pupils can ask directly to their tutors and they don't have to wait for it.

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,

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can enhance their knowledge and social abilities. To elaborate

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, in class, there are a large number of

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and they have different ideas and perspectives to solve

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problem. From

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, not only they can learn social skills but

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they can improve their general

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. To sum up, I partially agree with these options. I concur that technology is provided us to learn

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everywhere and the

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cost is expensive

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a traditional learning style can increase our social skills and

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