Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary epoch, enormously high levels of carbohydrates in commercial meals and beverages are the source of health issues. There is an idea of encouraging individuals to consume less

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by increasing the prices of

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products

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. Personally, I firmly believe that there is a defensible basis for

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approach. It cannot be denied that in nowadays society the proportion of health issues is proportionally linked with the consumption of

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products

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.

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, there is a direct correlation between intake of

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and obesity, diabetes mellitus, heart congestion and atherosclerosis. One possible approach how to persuade people to consume fewer

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products

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is to boost the prices of all items including

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.

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, advertising these

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on how unhealthy they are and what they may cause would be a prudent approach.

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, it is society´s paramount duty to tackle

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issue as soon as possible

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by the combination of price duplication and deterrent advertising.

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, in many restaurants salads are more overpriced than any other product containing manufactory sugars. To elaborate

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,

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situation is ridiculous, when

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that the production of salads is much less expensive in comparison with any other food item including carbohydrates. From

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point of view,

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products

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should be more financially costly and

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the consumption of items

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as salads might increase. To conclude, from the aforementioned examples,

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products

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should be made more costly to reduce their intake.

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, decreasing the prices of healthier food should encourage people to consume them.