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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

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Today's parents have a desire to provide a perfect education for their scion,
thus
, they want to make heir focus on their studies. They feel free to involve in students' coursework or school systems.
Therefore
, they offer to be given more recreation
time
 to kids to make their school duties. In my opinion, offspring should have extra free
time
 but not spend on coursework, to prepare for real
life
.
First
 of all, schools provide for students to gain partly real-
life
 experiences. After graduation, most students complain about not being ready for
life
. In their leisure
time
, they can spend
time
 in homeless shelters to distribute dishes to poor people, or they can visit orphanages and nursing homes to see how other people have problems and challenges to survive.
Secondly
, offspring
also
 can travel to other cities or countries to learn new cultures and customs from other nations. It provides to be open mind toward others and to discover new places and beauties.
This
 kind of
life
 experience is better than studying schoolwork by sitting at home.
For example
, you can read and learn more historical information, but after the exam, you can forget them, if you travel to the ruins from the ancient times, it will be unforgettable memories. Unfortunately, while creating systems to help others, we are missing an important question: what is their desire in their free moment, and what are their dreams to do? Probably, the answer is to play computer games. If we do not handle to improve our offspring's dreams beyond computer games, it will be unnecessary to talk about their relaxation hour activities. In the conclusion, parents' offers and children's dreams do not overlap with each other, there is a big gap between them. The education system cannot solve
this
 problem by giving extra free
time
 to children. Neither studying schoolwork nor playing computer games will not enhance the knowledge of our
next
 generations. According to me, it is the best option for kids to concentrate on
life
 experiences for children in their leisure
time
.
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