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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

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Nowadays, modern schools are facing a problem of poor behaviour and
this
 situation is worsening. There are numerous factors leading to
this
 issue, including a lack of discipline and a dysfunctional family environment.
This
 essay will look at the reasons for
this
 and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is a lack of discipline in schools.
This
 is because, in the majority of schools, teachers are not allowed to punish
students
. As pupils are not scared of getting punishments, they are more likely to break rules, thinking that there would be no consequences. The solution for the academy is to implement strict rules,
such
 as extra homework and corporal punishment.
Furthermore
, according to a report published in the UK journal of social sciences, the moral values of the public are affected and the school are the leading contributor.
Although
 many might claim that
students
 should not be punished, I believe that way forward is to control children. Another problem is a dysfunctional family environment. There are numerous broken families, and as a consequence parents can not pay attention to their children enough, because of working pressure.
As a result
, they might not get endi time to supervise their children, which could negatively impact the behaviour of a child.
Moreover
, the way forward might increase the salary of these broken families enough and pay attention to their background.
Also
, teachers should train these
students
 independently, till they feel satisfied. To sum up, the school plays a crucial role in everyone's behaviour. Only disciplined
students
 can create a bright future for society. That's why everybody should responsible for shaping society.
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