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It will be better to have wide use of driverless car for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Some
people
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 consider that community and individuals can be benefited from the widespread application of
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cars
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. As far as I am concerned, I agree with
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 viewpoint to a small extent as the drawbacks can overtake the benefits.
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 with, having wide use of
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cars
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 can result in unemployment. As only a little academic qualification is required to become a driver, many
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 live upon
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 occupation.
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, some early in Hong Kong support their life by working as a driver.
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people
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 will be replaced by robots or machines once the
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 car is imported.
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, those with low education will lose jobs and turn to government subsidies in order to finance their daily expenditure.
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, some
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 argue that using
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cars
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 can reduce the chance of accidents. As the processes of robots or machines are set by humans, the sensitivity will not change to other factors.
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, machines’ attention will not be affected by chatting. In another word,
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cars
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 can maintain a high concentration at any time.
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, a safer reaction can be made by
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cars
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 in some emergency situations as they can calculate and analyse the data in a shorter time. In conclusion,
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 safer traffic can be provided due to the high-quality reactions made by the
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 car, there are actually fewer and fewer road accidents recently.
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, protecting the job positions is more crucial as it can bring a financial burden to both individuals and society.
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