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Baheviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

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Today, the number of bad
behaviour
children
 at
school
 is increasing. But some people considered
this
 situation
children
 guilty . People should be encouraged to approach the problem from a different perspective. Because it does not depend on pupil everyone things.
This
 essay outlines some practical solutions to deal with
children
's bad
behaviour
 in
school
. The
first
 thing to be considered is that
children
 will be violent and wars between high
school
 pupils and elementary pupils.
This
 is a common situation in many
schools
. Perhaps
this
 problem can be effectively solved by in separate
schools
 strengthening discipline. These measures can be of great benefit to improving
children
's
behaviour
.
Secondly
, another reason can be to internet. Because nowadays almost everyone is using the internet.
This
 network has not only good sides but
also
 bad sides. Everyone uses it differently. Through the influence of the internet, a child can experience various internal experiences from them and
this
 situation does not leave him even when he goes to
school
. And
this
 in turn causes all sorts of problems. Parents should pay attention to their
children
 in
this
 regard. Because the end of
such
 cases does not end well. As mentioned above, parents
also
 have to do what the
school
 administration has to do.
In other words
, they
needs
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 to be disciplined and focused. On the whole,
,
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currently
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 there are some reasons behind the decline of discipline in
schools
such
 as large classes, absence of strict clear rules. It leads to violent
behaviour
 and bullying in
schools
 . The main measures, which should be taken in order to solve it, are clear
school
 rules and the more attention to parents
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