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many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

These days
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 tend to
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 longer compared to the past. Some of them devote themselves to working, and rarely spend their time on leisure activities. In my view, the disadvantages of
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 situation outweigh its advantages. On the one hand, working excessive hours can meet workers' financial requirements easily. Some
people
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 decide to
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 as long as possible because they can earn more money if they
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 longer. It is a good way for
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 who are planning to purchase something expensive
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 as a house, or travel abroad.
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, the more time
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 spend working, the quicker they can realise their dream. And
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,
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work
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 with clear purposes, so they are likely to satisfy with their
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 more than workers with no goals.
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, working long hours will cause serious damage to your health in a long run. Leisure activities will surely help workers to be activated and energetic after long hours of
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.
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, if
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 continue to
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 longer and longer, they will start to feel stressed because they seldom refresh their feelings by enjoying leisure activities.
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, I
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 at a supermarket. Since I need to earn a lot of money to study abroad, I have worked eight days in a row.
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, I felt depressed because of tiredness, and I could not continue to job for a week. In conclusion, while folks can have enough money by working longer, they need to take some disadvantages into an account as well. In my opinion, I believe there are more disadvantages when it comes to working long times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • stress relief
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • career progression
  • skill enhancement
  • quality time
  • financial security
  • leisure activities
  • physical health
  • personal relationships
  • stress-related illnesses
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