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In some area of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about that?

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These days in many countries including the US, many juveniles are not allowed to go out without any older adults at a certain time. Because the government and I believe that they should be protected from some dangers
such
 as burglaries, smuggles, murders and kidnappings which has an influence their mind in the future. The main reason that the government should be protected
teenagers
 is, that in some ,countries there are not any
rules
 about using
guns
 in the public.
For example
, in the US many adults have
guns
 to protect themselves, but some of them who are influenced by involving' s video games or films think that
guns
 are toys, so they attack public places
such
 as supermarkets or schools and kill
people
 and students. And destroyed everything. ,
Also
 it is essential that the youngsters are going out with their parents until these
rules
 will be correct.
In addition
, some places are not safe for the youngsters. Because there are many thieves, smugglers and kidnappers. In many news from many countries including the US, we heard about kidnappings or smuggles.
For example
, in some area of us, the rate of these crimes are increasing, so it is unreasonable that
teenagers
 are going out without any parents at night. If they will be burglary, it will have an impact on their mind and they might need psychologists.
However
, some
people
 claim that it is necessary to have
guns
 to protect ourselves, but it is important for the government to correct these
rules
 that nobody except some
people
 are allowed to buy
guns
. In conclusion, in many cities around the world
such
 as the US, it is important to care for and protect the
teenagers
 because there are not any
rules
 about access to
guns
 or there are many kidnappers and smugglers or thieves around us, so the best way is the
teenagers
 do not go out in certain time at night without their parents or any older
people
.
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