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Writing Samples
Band 6

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear neighbour, I hope you all are doing well. I am writing
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 letter in response to the complaint made by you regarding the
noise
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 from my house. I would like to shed some light on the reason behind the disturbance you are facing because of the loud
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. Our youngest one is only 4 years old and is fond of playing musical instruments. So, he never thinks about the time of the day, since he is still very young to understand
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 that it
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 cause disturbance to others. I sincerely apologize for his behaviour and the loud
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 made by him causing you problems.
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, I can understand the frustration you are going through because of
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, and
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 sorry for that
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. I will make sure to make him understand
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the inconvenience you are facing because of the heavy
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.
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, I am going to arrange headphones for him so that there will be no
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 that disturbs anyone. I am sure that
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 solution will definitely work and solve the issue. Your's Faithfully Ekansh

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coherence
Consider improving the logical flow between sentences, especially in explaining the reason for the noise.
cohesion
Try to separate ideas more clearly into distinct paragraphs, particularly the apology and the proposed solutions.
tone
The letter has a warm and polite tone throughout, which is appropriate for a communication with neighbours.
task achievement
You effectively addressed the three required points in your letter: the reason for the noise, an apology, and your intended actions.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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