Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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lingo is only necessary for travelling or working in
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foreign
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country.
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reasons why
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being
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should learn a foreign tongue. In
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I will discuss both of
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statements and in the
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I will share
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my own
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opinion
. To start with, mastering
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dialect may improve
person's
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social life,
hence
individual can make new international friendships.By learning
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foreign
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tongue, in the same
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you explore new culture for yourself. Studying a new culture helps you meet new and interesting people. One illustration of
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is ''Qasym Jomart Tokaev,
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president of
Kazakhstan
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republic. He
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worked as
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geography teacher at school,
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due to his ambition to travel around the world, he started to conduct lectures in different universities around the globe, in
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universities he spoke with different types of people and made
enermous
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enormous
amount of friendships.
Furthermore
, learning
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foreign
foreing
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dialect not only
develop
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communication skills
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it
also
may improve
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livelihood. Studying a foreign tongue will enhance your chances of getting your dream job.
For instance
,
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according
to Harvard university people who know 2 languages or more increase their chances drastically to get their job,
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others. In conclusion, the knowledge of foreign lingo
benefints
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benefits
benefit
not only in livelihood or
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field
,
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it
also
boost
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your social and communication skills that are
essantial
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essential
in today's world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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