In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have differing views about spending huge amounts of budgets on transportation systems. Some individuals believe that using them on developing new railway roads that can travel from cities to cities is the best

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while others hold the

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opinion

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that upgrading current public transit is more suitable. I will describe the pros and cons of both sides in

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essay along with my perspective. On the

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hand, advocates of the

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point out that

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have a big contribution to the fields of travelling which is

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of the main factors

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improving countries' economy. That's why building more railway roads with fast

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can indirectly affect the financial growth of

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country.

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,

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consume fewer fuels compared to cars and buses.

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, business companies use

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the train

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as

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transportation system for carrying goods from

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place to another.

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, constructing railways

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a lot of investments and commitments from authorities as it

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needs many latest

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and takes

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amount of time and no

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can tell expenditures

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will be covered in how many years. On the other

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, supporters of public transport highlight that improving public

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will surely have

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standard

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of living

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for citizens.

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, people could not only go to jobs in time which results in increasing the productivity of the city but

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go home early and rest

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would make them refresh their minds due to the easy

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transiting

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vehicles.

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, they can visit

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place to another with ease without worrying about

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anymore.

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, cars and buses which are the main existing public

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are contributing

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the major causes of releasing carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which can harm the

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of humans. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that I am of the

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opinion

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of allocating big

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amount

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of money to

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which can make the country's economy better and less environmental damaging effects.