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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems,as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In
this
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 era of rapid development, most
people
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 want to go abroad because of some reasons
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 as enhancing
language
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 abilities,finding a better
job
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 and recognizing many ranges of cultures.
Therefore
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,if
people
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 have a chance to go to a foreign
country
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 ,they may have to encounter oodles of difficulties in learning and observing a different
language
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,making many friends and finding a new occupation.
As a result
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,
people
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 who go overseas suffer from many issues due to speaking a foreign
language
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 because speaking another
language
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 plays a prominent role in
people
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's living standards and
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 their social lives.From my point of view,speaking that
language
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 while living in a foreign
country
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 can generate two major and valid problems .
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 of all , one of the drawbacks of having to speak a foreign
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 is communication.When somebody goes overseas,
this
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 person faces many challengings
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 as having to go to the supermarkets so as to buy nutrients ,recognizing natives and learning their cultures.
In other words
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,individuals who go to a foreign
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 ought to communicate with foreigners frequently in order to fulfil their basic duties and adapt to
this
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language
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 which is required.
This
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 can be really difficult for whoever goes abroad .
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,many surveys demonstrate that communities who go to a foreign
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 and have to speak a different
language
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 are getting used to it day by day and they don't live struggling thanks to trying to talk with foreigners and making native friends.
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.another of the disadvantages of having to speak a different
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 is finding a
job
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.
People
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 may face challengings when they find a
job
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 due to being a foreigner in that
country
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 so they feel more depressed and anxious whereas if they are used to speaking a foreign
language
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 ,they can find a
job
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 easily since employers want to work with nations who speak more than one accent.
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,lots of Turkish go to Germany and they find a
job
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 more easily than in their own countries because of the knowledge and speaking of both Turkish and German. To summarize,when all of these factors are taken into account
people
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 can suffer from many problems due to having to speak a foreign
language
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 .
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,if they adapt to speaking
this
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language
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,they have a lot of opportunities to find different jobs and expand their social areas.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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