A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your city and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Hello Navneet, I hope you and your family are doing great I am doing great too. Yesterday, I received your letter, in which you mentioned that you are planning to visit my
city
for two weeks. I am extremely excited that
finally
, you decided to explore my
city
.
Therefore
, I am writing
this
letter to provide you with some information which you asked me in your letter. Since I want to spend more and more time with you, I would be delighted if you would stay with me at my home. As you know, I am a good cook so I will definitely offer you the best homemade cuisine throughout your stay. But still, if you want to spend your two weeks in a hotel, I can share the list of top-rated hotels in my
city
which you can book
according to
your preference. Apart from that, I have prepared one itinerary for your trip, just like the best trip planner. As I know, you are religious just like me, so
firstly
we will explore some historical places which can help to connect us with our history. After that, we will attend a concert by the famous Punjabi singer Mr
diljit
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Diljit
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Singh and I already booked the ticket for that concert because it was difficult to get tickets on time. One thing I want you to mention is that please bring a lot of clothes as the weather in our
city
is totally uncertain so it is better to be prepared in advance.
Besides
that please do not forget your regular medicines as your health is most important and it is difficult to get the best health treatment in my
city
. I can't wait to see you and spend some quality time with you. I look forward to your arrival.
Your
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Yours
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faithfully Arsh
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea to avoid fragmentation.
suitable writing tone
Continue to maintain the friendly and engaging tone throughout your writing.
greeting and closing
The letter starts with a warm greeting and ends with a thoughtful closing, which is very effective.
logical structure
The logical structure of the letter is clear and easy to follow, with distinct sections for each piece of advice.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is appropriate and friendly, making the letter engaging.
complete response
The response addresses all parts of the task comprehensively, providing detailed information and advice.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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