Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity theft . what problem does cyber crime cause, and what solution can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

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In today's world, with the advancement of technology
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are becoming more and more advance. A lot of
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nowadays are worried about cybercrime
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as hacking and identity theft. There are a lot of problems cybercrime causes to the common man like blackmailing, hacking, and setting up a trap to rob
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's hard-earned money. I agree that
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should have a solution whenever an ordinary man faces some problem.
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with,
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in today's world use social media sites to blackmail and set a trap for ordinary
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.
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, cybercriminals tend to enter into
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systems by sending unnecessary links
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and calling
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by becoming fake bank agents and asking for their OTPs. If a person passes on the OTP without verifying the identity
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he may tend to lose all his money from the account.
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, more a more
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are becoming a victim of
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scenario.
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, every problem could be handled conveniently if given some time and resources. Government should set up a fast pacing cyber stations, where
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can report their complaints.
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, it's in
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's hands to not open any unwanted links which may lead to unnecessary activities
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as downloading viruses in the background, transferring computer data, and mirroring the user system.
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,
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should not share their OTPs with any other person whom they don't know, as
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could lead them to lose all of their hard-earned money.
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, everyone should check websites before filling out any necessary details to avoid any sort of hacking later. In conclusion,
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people
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are becoming smarter day by day, still they land up with either of the troubles mentioned above. It is more in our hands than anyone else's,
people
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should be self-responsible before giving out details. Various TV advertisements are
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coming to make
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aware before they try to do anything.
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