Most countries allow 18-year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow at this age. But others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Most countries permit youngsters to drive a car while some argue that the right old age to allow driving is 25. According to me, certain steps can be taken in order to conclude.
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essay will discuss both sides. It is true that many young drivers are careless towards their driving and don't follow traffic and driving rules. They don't use seat belts or lanes on the roads or speed limits in certain areas.
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, they have a desire to be cool in front of their friends and prefer having a thrill.
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, according to the survey held
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year, it is recorded that 60% of the accidents involved under 20 youth drivers.
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, car operators below 18 years of maturity cannot be trusted with driving.
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, motorists above 25 years of life understand the need to drive with care, following all the rules.
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, driving
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provides job opportunities to a person. Recently, it has been stated that car chauffeurs account for 40% of the population in a city and tourist places. A lot of people prefer to hire a driver for daily commutation between workplace and their home and
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, at a new place for tourism due to lack of driving rules and way to the destination.
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, one should be allowed in
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case to open job opportunities to many. In my opinion, driving is dangerous for a few whereas for others it is a wage to feed their families. Government should take initiative, in
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case, should not allow youngsters to drive off duty.
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way it will surpass the negative impact of early driving.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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