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An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life. What do you think are the reasons of this? Is it a positive or a negative development for society?

#people #careers #life #development #society
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 report sets out to identify the possible root causes of
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usage
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 that has not been reduced and propose a recommendation to improve the situation as there is a reduction in
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 guests, causing the profits of the
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 to suffer.
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 of the team from September to December 2023; observing the people in the
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 and their
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, finding out ways
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how to reduce the
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 level in the Heritage House
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 and
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 if so,
to discuss
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 with the team
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how to move towards sustainability and attaining the Green Mark Certification by the end of 2024 which will help the
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 gain new segments of guests and maintain business sustainability. A variety of research
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 used in gathering data and analysis.
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, a focus group discussion was conducted to find out the root cause of why the
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 in the
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 has not been reduced.
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, upon identifying the root cause, a survey was conducted to find out the main driver of the
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 that has not been reduced.
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, online research was conducted to gather suitable ideas on how to reduce the
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 level in the
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