Some people live to work, and others work to live. In most cases, this depends on the job they have and the conditions under which they are employed. In your opinion, what are the elements that make a job worthwhile?

Many strive to find a
job
that makes them happy.
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elements
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a
job
worthwhile? In
this
essay I will elaborate on the two elements I believe to be essential for a
job
to be considered worthwhile. The two factors I will discuss are
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Job
satisfaction and financial compensation.
Firstly
,
job
satisfaction is an essential part of a worthwhile vocation. Many spend more than 40 hours a week at the workplace.
This
is a significant proportion of our lives, which makes it crucial that one is content with
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daily tasks. If
this
is not the case, the probability of being unhappy with the
job
increases, which may lead some to dislike the
job
.
For instance
, doctors
work
extremely long shifts, though many are happy to do so
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since they know they are making a difference.
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, they are keen
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such
long hours because tend to be happy with their occupation.
Secondly
, financial
compenastion
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compensation
is another key factor.
This
serves as an incentive, as well as a reward for the time invested. For many
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key factor when it comes to choosing a vocation.
In addition
, a fair salary acts as a reward for the worker, which makes them feel appreciated for the hard
work
done.
Furthermore
, it can
also
act as an incentive, in the form of a bonus.
This
gives the employee a clear goal to aim for.
In other words
, a good salary is likely to increase one's willingness to
work
. In summary, in
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I have explored the two factors, which I believe to be necessary for a
whorthwhile
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worthwhile
short while
job
. In my opinion, a worthwhile should have a mix of both of these factors to make it ideal.
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