Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples.
In the modern era, globalisation is helping to bring the number of international organisations across the country.
Therefore
, a fair amount of experts believe that most of the environmental issues are being affected by these companies only. Linking Words
Hence
, I would like to agree with Linking Words
this
statement with a few sets of relevant examples.
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Firstly
, an Organisation is a combination of material and technology equipment. Linking Words
In addition
, these materials will be used to produce a finished product. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
while
producing the finished product there will be substantial wastage coming from the manufacturing process. Linking Words
Secondly
, the entire packing and supply are happening by using Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
plastic
bags only and these are becoming inevitable issues Use synonyms
to
our environment. Change preposition
for
For example
, Linking Words
the
mobile phone or computer packing bags Correct article usage
apply
are having
a life span of 1000 years which may be a potential risk to all of us. As per Wrong verb form
have
recent
survey Correct article usage
a recent
Google
findings, 90% of pollution is generated by industrial companies which Change preposition
of Google
came
from different countries only.
Wrong verb form
come
However
, undoubtedly, we cannot imagine any production process without Linking Words
plastic
material. In some of the production processes, Use synonyms
plastic
is one of the significant items which cannot be avoided at any cost.Use synonyms
such
as how can we produce a pen or table without Linking Words
plastic
? and these are being imported from other multinational companies only. In order to reduce the impact, the government should come up with some strong eco policies and put a ban on a few Use synonyms
plastic
items and Use synonyms
this
would help the local environment and the rest of the world as well.
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To sum up
, one must know what they are making in their company. No matter whether it Linking Words
can be
local or international. Wrong verb form
is
At the end
of the day, it is all about our environment and we should keep it safe and secure.Linking Words
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