Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work?

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work

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children

always

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a controversial subject in recent decades. Some people think that it is

advantages

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to

children

while others think its

harm

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to

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children

. On the one hand, supporters of

this

argument

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concern

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that paid

work

is an opportunity

to

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children

learning

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and

they

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can reduce the financial stress on their

family

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.

Children

are more respected

to

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them

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parent

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as they

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how hard their parents were.

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, they may

work

harder at school because aware that only knowledge can change their life.

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, a

ten year old

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boy unwilling

study

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and always late to school, his father

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him to his factory

worked

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for a week. After

this

week , the boy aware the how lucky he was and he study very hard and never

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late again. The supporter believe paid

work

is a good experience

to

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children

grow

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up.

On the other hand

, opposite viewers think that childhood should be play and

study

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,

work

for money is too stressful

to

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children

. Most of the

job

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, have to communicate with other people,

they

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may not

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and skilful enough to solve the abrupt problem. It will reduce their confidence and confidence is one of the most

importance

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feature

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to be

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success

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. Confidence

children

are better able to copy

with

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peers

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stress , challenge, drawback, and positive and negative emotion. Building

children

's self-confidence and learning knowledge is the

first

priority. In conclusion, both sides have

it

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advantages and disadvantages but I believe

than

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if it is possible

let

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children

enjoy their childhood, earning money is not their responsibility.