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It will be better to have wide use of driverless car for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#driverless #car #individuals #society
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The
transport
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sector
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 is highly
contraversial
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controversial
 on how it can be better
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 that certain demography states it can only be
productive
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 with a well-designed
transport
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 system.In
addittion
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addition
 with advancement in
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technology
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,technology
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this
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sector
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 can perform way better
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 to other fundamental departments.It will be
prefferable
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preferable
 to have extensive use of driverless machines for independents and
community
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the community
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.I concur with the mentioned statement with
reason
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 being it is reliable and efficient and
road
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safety
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 is
well taken
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 care
off
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.
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 with,driverless machines are reliable and efficient unlike where there use of
a
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drivers
that
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make
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transport
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sector
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 unreliable and inefficient due to
a great deal of
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a lot of
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distructions
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distractions
 which
draw
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draws
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drivers
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drivers'
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 attention from the
road
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.
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,
road
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safety
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 is indispensable which is an added merit when using driverless
automobile
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comparing
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 to drivers who put
the
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society at risk when they drive while tired or drunk.For
instant
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,
a
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 recent research from Nairobi university
indicate
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80
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that 80
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% of developed country advocates for
such
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 automobiles.
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,with the
technology
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 at hand
safety
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 and a reliable
transport
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sector
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 should be manageable.
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,
loss
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 of jobs which will lead to criminals increases since
pilots
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pilots'
pilot's
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 duties are taken over despite the new
develpoment
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development
 of
technology
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.
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addition
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 many families get
affectted
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affected
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 that they go hungry since the resources from
operator
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the operator
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is
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nolonger
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no longer
 available.
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example
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a
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recent research from
University
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the University
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 of Nairobi
indicate
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60
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that 60
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% of engineers have lost
job
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a job
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 in developing countries.
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,despite
technology
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 improving
on
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in
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this
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sector
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,
there
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their
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drawbacks
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are drawbacks
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 to
the
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apply
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society
such
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 as job loss and criminals. To sum up,driveless motorists are being prefered because it is reliable and efficient and
road
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safety
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 become established.
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,
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transport
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the transport
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sector
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need
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needs
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 to balance the use of
technology
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 and welfare of the society,
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