In some countries, owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays,

residence

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is considered to be fundamental for people's well-being.

Although

it is believed by numerous others that renting an apartment could be equally beneficial. I vehemently accord with the fact that

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living in a self-owned

home

can be remarkably superior. The benefit of owning a

home

entails numerous positives.

First

and foremost, plenty of individuals strongly support that an autonomous

home

could be extremely

cost effective

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for a family or even for one person.

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, despite the fact that a flat may seem an economical solution paying money in front

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a whole house is proven to save way more in the future.

For example

, the householder can consider it as an investment, so he will gain more profits along with several other financial advantages that his residence has to provide. Or even his

offsprings

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could inherit it as well. As an outcome, it is by no means clear that

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the convenience

that is

being offered is undebatable. Having a

home

in our possession can

fulfill

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us with even more pros as well.

Initially

, privacy and flexibility are considered to be the main preconditions for the formation of a dignified life.

Hence

,they can modify their

home

according to their needs and desires and feel secure in

it

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. To be more precise, the landlord has the privilege to renovate and redecorate whenever and

however

he wishes. Making minor adjustments and changes on a daily basis. Adding to

this

, our own personal space designed and constructed by us it is confirmed that increases our confidence and self-sufficiency. As an impact, the lifestyle of the person is being updated. In conclusion,considering all the aforementioned arguments into deep thought,it is apparent that residence ownership is irrefragably an asset for most people around the globe. It is my strongest

believe

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that, if someone

feel

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the necessity to develop his lifestyle for the better, the purchase of a detached house will be by far the best solution.