Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinon.
High-quality
children
are always considered to be highly valued people
in society
. Few are trust that could be done by parents
teaching while others think that will be done by a teacher in the school. This
essay will elaborate on my opinion and support it with practical real-life scenarios.
On the one hand, Parents
usually spent their time with children
. This
will leads them to share their work, life, society
, and cultural experience among them. Moreover
, by providing significant lessons from their real-life experience, children
could easily retain the facts in their minds when they are at the growing stage. For instance
, Parents
shall teach about how to obey grandparents. They also
shall guild them to behave in a professional manner in public places. Meanwhile, They also
can encourage them to provide help to poor people
who are needy. These activities generate children
to become valued people
and get respect from others as well.
On the other hand
, School could be a learning centre to understand the behaviours and implement to act like a good member. teachers use the methodology to make the students have socialization. They shall monitor and access students' characteristics in regard to it. To illustrates, the Teacher shall ask the students to share their breakfast. This
event will lead to breaking the caste differentiation and racism among them. Furthermore
, there will be a strong uniform system that could also
grow. Children
will enhance with strong interpersonal skills and brighten the society
.
In conclusion, from My perspective, I believe Parents
can teach their children
by sharing personal experiences and helping them to become invaluable people
in society
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