In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this ? How can people research this?

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an emphasis on his story about the building they live in. In
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of all, with the rapid improvement of technology. We can simply find out
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information online about construction currently.
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more details including materials and when the building
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.
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search for the information by themselves, they can avoid
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a civil end dishonest engineer and construction.
Secondly
, if
people
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it.
For instance
, some European now find out what their building experienced in the past. If they know that their houses witnessed
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World War 2 or
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much older than the owner they will become respectful.
In addition
, these make
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realize the value and treasure their houses. To sum up, It seems that understanding the story behind our house become a trend. It is a significant process to become
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owner before
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realize all details truly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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