You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir/Madam Dear Sir/
Madame
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This
is regarding the
article
you published in your magazine on the 20th of May 2022 about the major tourist attractions in Jodhpur. While I appreciate you writing about the beautiful places in my town, there is some false information. According to your
article
, lake Kaylana is the oldest lake in Rajasthan which is incorrect, it is the Dhebar lake which is the oldest one in Rajasthan. People around the globe rely on reading magazines to keep themselves updated with the latest trends. so any information shared in the blog is read by thousands of users including children, which makes it extremely important that you check the facts twice before releasing it to the public. I recommend releasing another version of the
article
stating the right information and informing the readers about the misinformation in the previous
article
. I hope you will take the necessary steps as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Hansa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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