Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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have been providing financial

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for decades, but

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has not changed the economic plight of poorer

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. I totally agree that the

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should be replaced b y other more effective forms of support, because of problems of corruption and poor economic management in these

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. The primary reason why financial

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is ineffective in easing poverty in recipient

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the level of corruption in poorer

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. The majority of the fund is misappropriated by officials before it trickles down to the people. As the leaders in these areas are not democratically elected and have a strong grip

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power, there is little leverage from the people to bring about change. To illustrate

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, we can take a look at African

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, which have constantly received financial support from Western

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but remains undeveloped and financially inadequate. Another reason why funding is not effective is that the recipient government does not have sound economic policies and good governance in place.

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means that these governments are not capable of managing the funds properly and the

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will be lost or misused.

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, ensuring governments are able to manage funds before the money is provided is crucial for positive outcomes from

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. In conclusion, I reiterate my strong view that other types of support other than money are necessary because financial

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is often misused by recipient

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due to corruption and financial mismanagement.

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, I recommend long term strategies to be put in place to ensure financial

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can be phased out.