You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear Mr Williams
I am writing
this
to share my feedback on the 14 days long cookery course that I took at your school during my summer vacations. Linking Words
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program was focused on teaching the fundamentals of baking to beginners like me.
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I enjoyed everything about the classes, one thing that I would like to particularly mention is the practical sessions that were conducted in groups of 3, which not only helped me to learn more from my teammates' experiences but Linking Words
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make new friends with similar interests. Linking Words
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made learning a fun experience.
Ever since I participated in your course I have been baking the bread myself. Not only that, but I have Linking Words
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baked cookies many times and surprised my sister on her birthday with a beautiful cake that I baked and decorated all by myself.
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next
in line that I am looking to learn is Italian or Chinese cuisine and I believe it would be great if you could offer the course because I already loved my Linking Words
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experience at your school.
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like you to keep me on your newsletters list so I can be aware of the new courses your school is planning to conduct.
Yours Sincerely
HannahLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
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- for example
- for instance
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- however
- although
- even though
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