Is fame good or bad Give your own opinions and discuss both view
While some individuals believe that it is good to be popular, there are other opponents
firmly
support the oppositeCorrect pronoun usage
who firmly
one
. In my following Correct pronoun usage
apply
essay
I would take both under consideration but emphasize more Add a comma
,essay
on
my agreement Change preposition
apply
toward
the former opinion.
Other and individually myself Change preposition
with
to
believe fame is good mainly because it is beneficial for our life. Fix the infinitive
apply
For instance
, many celebrities try to be scandalous to get more public attention. Linking Words
Therefore
, it brings them more jobs and higher salaries. Linking Words
Otherwise
, many Linking Words
people
use their popularity to benefit Use synonyms
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
People
who are famous often have Use synonyms
impact
on the community that they can use to spread good messages that raise Add an article
an impact
Correct article usage
the public’s
public’s
awareness. Change noun form
public
In addition
, they can call Linking Words
people
to donate Use synonyms
into
charity funds giving to Change preposition
to
people
who need Use synonyms
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
On the other hand
, there are several Linking Words
reason
for Change to a plural noun
reasons
people
to think bad about fame. Use synonyms
For instance
, Taylor Swift is famous for her talents and beauty Linking Words
that
brings her the love of fans and money. Correct pronoun usage
which
However
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
keeps
following and stalking her which gives her no privacy in her personal life. Change the verb form
keep
Moreover
, some Linking Words
people
want to be famous so bad that they only care about their social Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
media
medias
Correct your spelling
media
instead
of their real life. Linking Words
This
leads to a group of Linking Words
people
who always use their Use synonyms
phone
and do not care about their friends and family.
In conclusion, being famous has many benefits that can not be rejected. In spite of some disadvantages, I think everyone should have a good reputation in their community.Fix the agreement mistake
phones
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