Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful
Dear Sara
I hope
this
letter finds you well.I am writing this
letter to tell you about my recent findings about nutrition websites.
I know you are working on an enormous title about food and diet
that will have incredible
effect in the future and I Add an article
an incredible
also
, realize that one of your important sources is the Internet and its platforms. Yesterday, while
I was surfing the net, suddenly I found a very useful website about nutrition and several types of diet
. It has complete information about different types of food and interestingly, this
website contains a free test for analysing your body.
I found it suitable for you.Since,as I know, you were looking for a reliable sit which have the majority of new information. This
platform has strong content with very efficient categories. Such
as seafood, vegetables and even fast foods and how to make them healthier. By a little searching, you will come to the conclusion that this
site would be credible.
I highly recommend you to
check the Fix the infinitive
apply
diet
part. You may get shocked. A vast variety of diets are mentioned and you have a chance to compare them and also
,inform about their merits and demerits. You may surprised if you take part in a free test that is
provided about your health level. In addition
, the site will give you a suitable diet
according to
the test with elaborate details.
Best wishes
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task achievement
Consider using a more formal sign-off phrase such as 'Yours sincerely' or 'Best regards'.
coherence cohesion
You could enhance the logical structure by breaking up longer paragraphs into shorter, more concise sections.
greeting and closing
Opening and closing of the letter are appropriately friendly and contextual, matching the intended tone for writing to a friend.
logical structure
Provided links and reasons for visiting certain websites as requested, giving clear and concise information.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite