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Some people feel the best way to reduce the member of accidents on the road is to further limit the speed of vehicles. Others think that there are better ways to tackle this issue. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
accidents
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 are becoming a major concern for many countries across the globe. Some part of the population argues that
accidents
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 can be reduced by limiting the speed of
vehicles
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 while some say
accidents
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 can be reduced by approaching the other ways. Information contained within the following paragraphs will explore both views. I agree to some extent as there are better ways to reduce
accidents
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 than restricting
vehicles
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 with lower speeds.
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 and foremost, many citizens think that travelling in
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 at high speed will lead to
accidents
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. Because of that reason, they believe limiting the speed of
vehicles
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, will solve
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 problem.
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, if someone drives their vehicle at 40 mph, they will have better control over their vehicle and could stop at any moment which results in avoiding
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. With that said, other parts of the population feel that,
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 of reducing the speed limit, they think it's better to follow
traffic
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 rules,
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 as stopping at a red signal, use of indicators etc.
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, some would suggest that
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 elderly people should not allow young ones to drive
vehicles
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 until they get a driving license.
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, youth under 18 years of age, should not drive
vehicles
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. Drunk and drive tests should be done constantly on the drivers by city
traffic
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 police officers. To sum up, I partially agree with the point of limiting the speed of
vehicles
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 to reduce
accidents
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 as there are a few other ways
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 as following
traffic
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 rules, constant monitoring of
traffic
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 police etc. to lower road
accidents
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.

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