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your best friend is getting married next month, write a letter to your friend and congrtulation hinr her , tell when yiu are cominh and tell what will youdo together in order to enjoy that day.

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Dear
john
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John
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,
i
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I
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 hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
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 letter to you
for giving
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to give
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 my heartful congratulations
to
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on
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 your lifelong happiness as you are becoming
broom
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a broom
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 as soon. I could not
experss
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express
 my joy and excitement for your marriage in words as well. As you know recently, I have opened the cafeteria in my hometown.
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, I am so busy right now but I will come prior 10 days to your marriage date. As we
have
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discussed
last
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 time, we will
be shared
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share
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 and
enjoyed
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enjoy
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 all
memories
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the memories
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 of our friendship again as same as doing
in
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on
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 every marriage
occassions
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occasions
occasion
. I have already arranged your bachelor party at
Suzi
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the Suzi
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 Hotel
before
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apply
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one day
of
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before
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 your wedding.
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, we will perform the classic dance and sing rock music together to commemorate
this
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 special day. I have a plan for arranging a beautiful dinner night for you and your wife at the Villa Resort where we often go together. warm wishes for both of you. yours lovingly Jack

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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to use varied sentence structures and check for typographical errors to enhance the clarity and professionalism of your writing.
Task Achievement
Be mindful of spelling, especially for key terms such as 'broom' (groom) to ensure your message is easily understood.
Greeting and Closing
Your introduction and conclusion added a warm, personal touch to your letter, which is excellent for the context.
Complete Response
You effectively addressed all parts of the task with specific details about your plans and congratulations, demonstrating a thorough understanding of the task requirements.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cordially
  • congratulate
  • momentous occasion
  • cherished memories
  • heartfelt congratulations
  • joyous celebration
  • lifelong happiness
  • wedding preparations
  • to partake in the festivities
  • best wishes
  • memorable experience
  • commemorate this special day
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