Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

The modern era has adapted the

use

of

technology

which is facilitating the effectiveness of work and increasing productivity.

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,there is a great deal of contention that laptops can have more demerits

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merits

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effects on

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young ones

if they are utilized daily.I completely agree that they can cause health

problem

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to them and

interfear

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interfere

with

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concentration in academic study

Firstly

.

children

can get addicted to the

computer

if not properly monitored leading to eyesight hitch which can lead to

future

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complication

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that can affect their day to day life.

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,

technology

can affect

students

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academic

perfomance

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performance

such

that they become nonproductive in school.They are not able to concentrate and end up dropping from attending school.

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research done by the University of Nairobi indicates that 70% of school

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out

is

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due to

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technology

.

Therefore

,it is indispensable to allow

little

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one

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to

use

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a laptop

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laptop

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but they should be monitored to allow them

attend

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to other fundamental activities

Secondly

,since

technology

has tremendously been adapted in the world,

children

who are exposed to

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a computer

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computer

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computers

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are at a higher chance of getting employment in future.

In addition

,

youngones

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young ones

became more creative and innovative which can be a window to the world.

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research done by the University of Nairobi

indicate

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that 80% of

children

in developed countries learn with

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computer

all through

academic

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period.

Therefore

,it is imperative for

children

to know more about the

use

of the

computer

as it will be an added advantage in seasons of job search. To sum up,it is crucial for

children

know

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how to

use

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the computer

a computer

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computer

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computers

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even albeit they should be monitored for them to be utilized well and for a good purpose since it can highly cause harm rather than assist them.