some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important and valuable to be shared freely. discuss both views and give your own opinion. answer:
Information
is the knowledge obtained from an investigation. It is considered by some that sharing much information
is good in science research
, business
and the academic world. While there are others who think that some important and valuable pieces of information
are not being shared freely. In my opinion, I consider that sharing information
is essential for some kinds of scientific research
and academic that are not harmful to the person
while some news is so important and valuable in parallel business
to be shared freely.
On the other hand
, many think that it is better for sharing information
as much as possible in research
, business
, and education. This
means that the people in the research
and academic world can improve in their respective fields by sharing information
with one
another. As for the business
, a person
can share information
like how to do and how to manage in such
as his family or relative's business
. Sharing news, It can make human beings get better in their life, and then
develop the country.
On the other hand
, some information
, like harmful to a person
in research
and important own things in technology for business
company, should not be shared freely. For instance
, some explored things similar to the bombs or some toxic like poison or some straight things in science research
should not be copied freely to the bad guys. It can hurt another. As for the top secrets of one
company like producing news valuable product, it must be kept before performancing to the world.If not, as an example, when the other company in parallel business
steal before introduction, it cannot get gain. So, pieces of information
are not freely shared to protect our society or our business
.
Finally
, in my opinion, much information
which is very helpful and well-educated to a man should be shared as much as possible. It can make to improve one
person
, one
person
to one
group and then
the whole country. In conclusion, giving knowledge can affect a person
's life whether how they used it is good or bad.Submitted by moeandrea031 on
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