Nowadays most of the crimes are done by youngsters what are the causes of this and what solutions can be taken??
Over the past few decades, a lot of, technologic inventions has taken place.
Along with
that, the crime rate also
has been increased exponesially especially by the youth
. In the upcoming, Paragraphs, one is going to discuss the possible causes and solutions to keep youth
away from committing the crime. One shall also
evolve a conclusion from them. Reasons: Peer Pressure - Youth
generally spend most of their time on social media so it is quite natural for them to be influenced by celebrities or even by their friends. For instance
, if a fellow friend is uploading their sports bike’s pictures on such
a platform then
they develop insecurities thus
they are prone to commit a crime. Quick money Technically advanced. Hacking Solution: Mentorship Counseling to remove inferiority complex Employment opportunity Family bond A fear of punishment To conclude
, Youth
is the future of the nation and they are responsible for the growth of a country. However
, it is possible for them to misguide under some influence; mentorship and counseling can be considered as a saviour.Submitted by Krishna.gandhi on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion