Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment?

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Communication has been
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human beings since the beginning of
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time. humans communicated with
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language
each other,
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, numerous types of
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have existed due to the different kinds of races around the world. Most people were known
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the only
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since they were born. So, if they have to live in a foreign country, they will not only have social
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but
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practical
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of all, if ones stay in the foreign
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countries
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that
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they are not fluent in their
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languages
, they will surely have
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problems
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with
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communicating
with others as they hardly understand quickly what others want to say. By virtue of that,
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friends will be made which is one of the main factors of success in any
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.
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, they will sound
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rude to natives since they don't know how to use pronouns or polite words properly and even though they understand the language, they will have a hard time
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a grip on
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the accents
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of the natives.
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,
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english
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is used by most western
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, it is still hard for
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speakers to fully understand in every western
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because of the accents. Turning to the practical
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, one of the chief issues is that
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employees
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who work
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in other
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might have a chance to make mistakes as they are not familiar with foreign
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.
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, people from another country might cause unrespected behaviours to cultures and traditions of other
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due to the cultural differences.
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, some
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like Japan or Korea warmly welcome
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the foreigners who
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their
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. They
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forgive the mistakes that can happen and correct them if necessary. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that if ones decided to live in and work in another country, they must learn and fluent in
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their
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first
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otherwise
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they will have face
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socially or practically.
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