Some people believe that everyone has right to university education. Therefore, government should make university education free for eyeryone, no matter what their financial bockground is. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that in recent day schooling has available for everyone in free should the
studntes
Correct your spelling
students
have a better
university
.the question is,why of
majortiy
Correct your spelling
majority
a
high level
Add a hyphen
high-level
show examples
university
it is in
money
some students they can pay for education at all time the give up about there dream; it is
expenisve
Correct your spelling
expensive
,in
this
essay, I am going to discuss both
view
Change to a plural noun
views
show examples
and drew my own conclusion.in trem
nativegs
Correct your spelling
natives
they well be
number
Change the article
a number
the number
show examples
of unemployment
also
the
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
increase
salaeies
Correct your spelling
salaries
inlculod
Correct your spelling
included
the
figurs
Correct your spelling
figures
figure
of people in
university
Add an article
the university
show examples
well drop
significant
Change the adjective
significantly
show examples
.the main reason given to
supportthis
Correct your spelling
support this
support his
claim is that in
suadi
Correct your spelling
Saudi
Suadi
arabia
Change the capitalization
Arabia
show examples
the number of
studens
Correct your spelling
students
in free
cuores
Correct your spelling
courses
is
roeked
Correct your spelling
rocked
more
then
Replace the word
than
show examples
the Al-Ahly
university
the one with the
money
,To illustrate some case of the nine students is not
allow
Change the form of the verb
allowed
show examples
to pay for
there
Correct your spelling
their
show examples
program,
Nevertheless
Add a comma
,Nevertheless
show examples
acccounts
Correct your spelling
accounts
for 50 per cent of the total people they withdrawal from the
university
due to the can pay
anymore
Replace the word
any more
show examples
,on one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of schooling free with climb
figurs
Correct your spelling
figures
figure
employs
also
there is no
umeployment
Correct your spelling
unemployment
employment
and everyone studies in a free and major he can
succiful
Correct your spelling
successful
and creatively,
However
,it is
also
possible to make the opposing case.it is often argued that in
fact
Add a comma
,fact
show examples
I believe the
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
should open more and more for
Add an article
the university
a university
show examples
university
Fix the agreement mistake
universities
show examples
to be
alond
Correct your spelling
along
for everyone,
To begin
with in
meddile
Correct your spelling
middle
of town it is better to open
fifve
Correct your spelling
five
or sex-
university
,
in
addition
Add the comma(s)
,addition
show examples
balance between a free
coures
Correct your spelling
courses
course
plas
coures
Correct your spelling
courses
course
with
money
considering to wasting
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
money
;the building
need
Change the verb form
needs
show examples
meony
Correct your spelling
money
furthermore
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
good teachers the want
salaers
Correct your spelling
sales
it
is does
Change the verb form
does
show examples
not become unfair from the two parties in conclusion,
although
it
is see
Change the verb form
is seen
show examples
to me solve with my suggestion
haman
Change the capitalization
Haman
show examples
deserve
a
Change the article
the
show examples
highest level for education it is
responseable
Correct your spelling
responsible
of the
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
.
Submitted by abrar501otb on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: