Some people think that young people should follow older people's examples. Others believe it is quite natural for teenagers to challenge what old people say. Describe both point of views. Give your opinion with reasons and relevant examples.

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Some individuals think that teenagers should obey and believe
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what older
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have taught and shown them, while others disagree and think that the new generation should try to learn and discover new things by themself because it is quite natural for young
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. In my opinion, I believe that younger
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should respect older
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and learn from their mistakes. In the following paragraphs, both viewpoints and my opinion will be discussed. On the one hand, it is true that older
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have more
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than younger because they have been in the
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longer than teenagers. So, it is a good thing to believe and follow their examples, in order to learn from older
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's mistakes and adapt that
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to
life
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, when we might have faced
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some problems, these
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must have beneficial in some ways.
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, some grandfathers have taught their grandsons that they should be
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student
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because their grandfathers did not have opportunities to study in school and their
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are tough and struggled without knowledge from school. So, I
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believe that older
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's example can give so many precious lessons to their offspring.
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, some
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think that children should live their own
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and challenge what older
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say because they are
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so they have different
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, nowadays, there are advancements in technology and in other parts of our lives. The
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has been changing all the time.
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, older
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's
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do not matter to younger, who live in the
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of advancement.
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,
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generation of
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should try to learn new things and leave those elderly's examples behind.
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, in the
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where older
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live their lives, all of them cannot access
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the internet, so they cannot find any knowledge like
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in the present
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can do. In conclusion, there are
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individual points of view about
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whether young
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people
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should or should not follow older
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's examples and believe what they say. In my view, I think younger should respect older and follow some kind of example that gives them good lessons and can lead them to have a good
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • experience and wisdom
  • societal norms
  • moral compass
  • stability and respect
  • outdated methods
  • forge new paths
  • critical thinking
  • personal growth
  • develop beliefs and ideologies
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