Some people think that young people should follow older people's examples. Others believe it is quite natural for teenagers to challenge what old people say. Describe both point of views. Give your opinion with reasons and relevant examples.
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have taught and shown them, while others disagree and think that the new generation should try to learn and discover new things by themself because it is quite natural for young people
. In my opinion, I believe that younger people
should respect older people
and learn from their mistakes. In the following paragraphs, both viewpoints and my opinion will be discussed.
On the one hand, it is true that older people
have more experiences
than younger because they have been in the world
longer than teenagers. So, it is a good thing to believe and follow their examples, in order to learn from older people
's mistakes and adapt that experiences
to life
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experiences
must have beneficial in some ways. For instance
, some grandfathers have taught their grandsons that they should be good
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believe that older people
's example can give so many precious lessons to their offspring.
On the other hand
, some people
think that children should live their own life
and challenge what older people
say because they are different
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people
experiences
. Additionally
, nowadays, there are advancements in technology and in other parts of our lives. The world
has been changing all the time. Then
, older people
's experiences
do not matter to younger, who live in the world
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the new
people
should try to learn new things and leave those elderly's examples behind. For example
, in the world
where older people
live their lives, all of them cannot access to
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people
in the present world
can do.
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whether young
people
should or should not follow older people
's examples and believe what they say. In my view, I think younger should respect older and follow some kind of example that gives them good lessons and can lead them to have a good life
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