Some people think tgat children be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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it is sometimes thought that

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ought to be trained

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competition, other people believe that association and unity are more essential. In my opinion, I consider that

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and

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dynamics are crucial and should be learnt in formal education. On the one hand, many individuals think that young

children

educated to work as a team are well prepared for future lives and, I agree.

In other words

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included in

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curriculum, it would

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younger ones for the competitive system in the real world.

For example

,

children

will be in competition with peers during

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application process as well as when searching

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in the labour market.

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to have knowledge

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contesting.

Furthermore

, it creates motivation.

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is because younger ones are

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to work harder, making them more excited about learning.

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, they are inspired

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education.

On the other hand

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essential social skills are built if

children

are taught association and synergy.

This

means when students work as a team they learn how to listen attentively to their leaders, in order to perform their individual roles.

For instance

, in order to achieve a set down goals in a

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, each member must contribute effectively and follow instructions laid down by the coordinator.

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school

children

develop constructive speaking and conscious listening. Another reason is that it boosts

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self- confidence

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. In order words, students knowing that their voices will be heard and appreciated in the

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will be more courageous and encourage

further

participation in

group

activities. For

this

reason, it improves their

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. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions. I think that

group

cohesion and partnership are more advantageous as it fosters interpersonal skills and self - assertiveness