In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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the driver worker from any vehicles and only through Internet or robot do

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responsibility. It is clear that

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method has advantages and disadvantages. In my

opinion

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the negative points of

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decision are outweighs

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the positive points. Our environment will encounter

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considerable change in subway systems through replace the role of drivers with

robots

or telecommunication. Government take

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view concerning

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less human error and increased safety in

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issue. In fact, the net effect is that

robots

are capable to store data and process as well as

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them at

soonest

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time without any fault. As in the case of Nasa,

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company have started their experiment to send

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to the moon by cooperating robot .

moreover

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trend will be increases flexibility and

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in recognizing the way of passenger’s request.

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, the aim of

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issue is placing focus on human welfare and decrease the rate of

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; the percentage of unemployment will

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significantly and leads to several problems

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as

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problems, depression and anxiety or level of income. According to

previous

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paragraph, one responsible

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robots

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human request and

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each of the subway patterns to make

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decision

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, if they face

distraction

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in

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Internet

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or infrastructure, they will have

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accident

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and maybe

passenger

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will die. As well as the

maintain

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cost of

robots

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high and

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negative

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impact on

economy

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of society. In conclusion , the goal of

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manner is to engender the progress for folk but have

significant

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effect on human life ad their

behaviout

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behaviour

in which to overcome these problems maybe take long

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.

Therefore

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the

drivers

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role is not advisable .