You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Hansa I am writing to you regarding your performance at a recent concert in Jodhpur townhall on 20th of May.

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and foremost, I would like to mention I absolutely loved your performance and feel it was the best performance at the concert, what I liked most about your singing is how effortlessly you switched between high and low notes.

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to that, your voice is one of the sweetest and most soothing ones that I have ever heard. Being a music enthusiast since childhood, I have been taking singing classes after school for the

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few years and recently I have

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developed my interest in playing the guitar. I am planning on pursuing an education in music after high school. It would be very helpful to me if you could recommend the colleges that I should consider applying to after high school to grow into a better singer. I look forward to hearing your suggestions. Yours sincerely Hansa

hansa.pandit11Sat Jun 04 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
talent
repertoire
collaboration
mentorship
resonate
aspiring musician
composition
rendition
inspirational
vocal range
harmonize
skillset

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