Some people say that the main environmental probelm of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have been spending the natural resources carelessly and ruining the gifts of nature since the beginning of

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time. Because of that, we now face the consequences of those behaviours and other living

species

are affected indirectly by them and some people believe

that is

the major

envirtonmental

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environmental

problem while others hold the view that there are other integral matters

besides

that.

First

of all, there are several reasons why some specific living

species

are

extincted

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extinct

and one of the chief reasons is

prevalence

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the prevalence

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of

deforestations

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deforestation

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around the world as any life depends on living spaces which can provide food and shelter and forests have a great contribution to

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matter.

Also

, not only

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affects

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to

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animals and plants but

also

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global warming since forests maintain the temperatures and reduce the carbon dioxide level in the atmosphere.

Moreover

, due to the fact that increasing number of poaching in the past years, some

of

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the rare animal

species

went

to

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extinct.

Furthermore

,

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of cities

make

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lesser places for animals to live

in

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and transportation

vechicles

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vehicles

which release a lot of carbon dioxide into the air

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come along with cities. By virtue of that, air pollution has

also

become one of the main environmental issues nowadays.

In addition

, dumping huge amounts of trash into the ocean and transportation performed by ships cause water pollution as well as

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extinction

exstinction

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of some aquarium

species

. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that when it comes to environmental issues, there is no issue

that is

the most important, all problems are as important as others and people should take

actions

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in every possible way

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they can to recover the nature rather than debating over what is more important than others.