You recently registered for a course and you cannot attend the class for some reasons. Write a letter to your course instructor, and in your letter Introduce yourself. Explain the situation. and say what action you would like to take.
Dear Mr.Smith,
The main reason why I am writing is to tell you that I cannot attend the
class
organized next week to improve my English skills.
Firstly
, I must introduce myself. I am the
student who Correct article usage
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study
at 6th school. My name is Diana Johnson. Wrong verb form
is studying
Also
, I live near my school.
One of prime
reasons why I will not Add an article
the prime
able
to participate is that I have a cold. My body temperature is rising day by day and even, I cannot Add a missing verb
be able
standing
up on my legs. Change the form of the verb
stand
Furthermore
, I have had a headache for so days. Although
,
I Remove the comma
apply
want
to go, my mother did not allow me because of my illness. If I was not sick, I would attend the Wrong verb form
wanted
class
on time.
I want to ask another
opportunity Change preposition
for another
for missed
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to miss
class
because I have Correct article usage
the class
been
wanted to improve my English Unnecessary verb
apply
class
through that lesson. It was the
chance for development.
Yours sincerely,
Diana Johnson.Correct article usage
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You've effectively introduced yourself and explained the situation, which aligns well with the task's requirements.
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Your polite tone and structure, including an appropriate greeting and closing, are excellent.
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The organization of your letter into clear paragraphs for each point is commendable.