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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals believe when
one
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 is going to learn a foreign
language
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 is because of working or travelling to other countries. Other people think those are not the only reasons for people’s learning of foreign
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. I am going to discuss these different points of view and in the end, I will give my own opinion. It is essential to know a foreign
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 if
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 wants to work in other countries for communicating with employees or with the citizens of the nation.
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, when
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 knows other foreign
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, he/she could have more job options or has more chances of being hired from non-native companies.
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, it is true in the case of the students who want to pursue their knowledge by applying to overseas universities.
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, some people are going to learn other
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 just because of their hobbies or interest in other
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.
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, my sister watches a lot the Korean dramas and unconsciously
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 in
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language
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 and decided to learn it.
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, some other people found that
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 of the best ways to know more about the other nation’s traditions is learning their
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. In conclusion, in my opinion, nowadays because of technology and society's progress, learning non-native
languages
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 is a kind of essential thing to do for more convenient communications or trading.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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