In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not trael abroad on holiday. Agree or disagree?

In a pandemic scenario, everybody from all over the world
avoid
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travel
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travelling
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abroad and
go
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to check
it
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apply
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out
their
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in their
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own country.
Traveling
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in
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to
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your
homecountry
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home country
might be cheaper and a deeper
experiencing
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experience
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of
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along
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our own culture.
Besides
that, I believe that
this
behaviour won´t be long and
travel
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travelling
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overseas is always going to be the people´s
first
choice. Due to the massive
turist
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tourist
advertaisments
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advertisements
and facilities that we can experiment
nowadays
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with nowadays
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, I disagree that people will prefer to stay in
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home country
homecountry
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their homecountry
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instead
go abroad.
Firstly
, the amount of
advertaisments
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advertisements
that allow you to
seen
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from scream other places,
culture
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cultures
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and dishes is breathtaking.
For instance
, googling about any country makes you be in touch with nice experiences which
it
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apply
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will make you
deserves
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that.
This
shows, that the massive information from all over the world is
a
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invite to join a trip.
Consequently
, people would prefer to keep in touch with new cultures than stay nearby to what is already known.
Secondly
, the facilities to
travel
overseas
is
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enourmous
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enormous
and as you have
passport
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a passport
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you are able to go anywhere.
For example
, a
hundreds
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of flight company is available and offers
afordable
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affordable
tickets price as long you plan previously.
Also
, electronic devices
is
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are
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prepare
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to facilitate communications skills which make zero effort to deal with any situation. Most important to say is that as much you have
budget
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the budget
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,
travel
to another place should be easy considering the tools
that
is
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are
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useful for
travelers
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travellers
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.
As a result
, the number of international flights
are
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is
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increasing day by day. To sum up,
go
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going
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abroad should be better than
stay
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staying
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in your
homecountry
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home country
as long you pick the right information and have
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knowledge
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to use the facilities mentioned above.
Accordingly
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with my
analyses
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,analyses
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I would not say that
peolpe
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people
prefer
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go on holidays in their own country than
travel
abroad. My prediction is that
travel
overseas is
incrising
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increasing
even more and all about that depends on
you
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your
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feeling of adventure, the
bugdet
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budget
and
an
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the
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efficient planner you are.
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