In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not trael abroad on holiday. Agree or disagree?
In a pandemic scenario, everybody from all over the world
avoid
Change the verb form
avoids
travel
abroad and Wrong verb form
travelling
go
to check Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
it
out Correct pronoun usage
apply
their
own country. Change preposition
in their
Traveling
Change the spelling
Travelling
in
your Change preposition
to
homecountry
might be cheaper and a deeper Correct your spelling
home country
experiencing
Replace the word
experience
Change preposition
of
along
our own culture. Add the preposition
withalong
Besides
that, I believe that this
behaviour won´t be long and travel
overseas is always going to be the people´s Wrong verb form
travelling
first
choice. Due to the massive turist
Correct your spelling
tourist
advertaisments
and facilities that we can experiment Correct your spelling
advertisements
nowadays
, I disagree that people will prefer to stay in Change preposition
with nowadays
Correct your spelling
home country
homecountry
Correct pronoun usage
their homecountry
instead
go abroad.
Firstly
, the amount of advertaisments
that allow you to Correct your spelling
advertisements
seen
from scream other places, Change the form of the verb
see
culture
and dishes is breathtaking. Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
For instance
, googling about any country makes you be in touch with nice experiences which it
will make you Correct pronoun usage
apply
deserves
that. Change the verb form
deserve
This
shows, that the massive information from all over the world is a
invite to join a trip. Change the article
an
Consequently
, people would prefer to keep in touch with new cultures than stay nearby to what is already known.
Secondly
, the facilities to travel
overseas is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
enourmous
and as you have Correct your spelling
enormous
passport
you are able to go anywhere. Add an article
a passport
For example
, a hundreds
of flight company is available and offers Correct the article-noun agreement
hundred
afordable
tickets price as long you plan previously. Correct your spelling
affordable
Also
, electronic devices is
Change the verb form
are
prepare
to facilitate communications skills which make zero effort to deal with any situation. Most important to say is that as much you have Wrong verb form
prepared
budget
, Add an article
the budget
a budget
travel
to another place should be easy considering the tools that
is
useful for Change the verb form
are
travelers
. Change the spelling
travellers
As a result
, the number of international flights are
increasing day by day.
To sum up, Change the verb form
is
go
abroad should be better than Wrong verb form
going
stay
in your Wrong verb form
staying
homecountry
as long you pick the right information and have Correct your spelling
home country
Correct your spelling
knowledge
knowlodge
to use the facilities mentioned above. Correct article usage
the knowlodge
Accordingly
with my Add a comma
,Accordingly
analyses
I would not say that Add a comma
,analyses
peolpe
Correct your spelling
people
prefer
go on holidays in their own country than Add the particle
toprefer
travel
abroad. My prediction is that travel
overseas is incrising
even more and all about that depends on Correct your spelling
increasing
you
feeling of adventure, the Correct pronoun usage
your
bugdet
and Correct your spelling
budget
an
efficient planner you are.Correct article usage
the
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