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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #media #privacy #price #fame #invasion #life
In today's world, celebrities are often treated unfairly by the media. Some
people
 believe that they require some freedom in order to enjoy their lives. Others believe that if their personal lives became more public, they would become more famous. I will discuss both points of view and offer my opinion on them in
subsequent
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 paragraph. On one hand, being famous entails having a large number of admirers, constantly having
people
 from the media around to take pictures and videos of everything famous
people
 do, and being surrounded by
people
 who want autographs from their idol celebrities. Popular
people
 find it difficult to maintain the privacy that they deserve
as a result
 of their fame in their professional lives. Not everyone is comfortable with someone invading their personal space.
On the other hand
, allowing others to intrude on the privacy of famous
people
 can sometimes result in the loss of their fan following, which is the most important part of their life. Stopping the media with offensive words when recording a video of them,
for example
, can send the wrong message to those who admire them for their directness. To summarise, being famous has both benefits and drawbacks. Having an absconded and open nature can get you more fame
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 but at the cost of having
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 private life hampered.
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