A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

#museum #home #people #work #director #skills #qualities

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you

this

letter regarding your recent advertisement in Montreal Sunny newspaper on 6th June 2022. My name is Mohammad and, I am an international student from Iran. I am studying Business Administration in college Herzing. I came to Montreal in 2019 and, due to the pandemic I studied my whole course online and, I didn’t have a chance to connect with people properly.

Therefore

this

voluntary job could be a great opportunity for me to connect with people, gain Canadian work experience and be in the community. As I mentioned before, I studied BA and one of my courses was about Social Media Marketing. I have to say, that I have a YouTube channel and, a TikTok account along with Instagram and, I will consider myself an influencer.

Therefore

, I believe my knowledge, skills and, experience on social media can help to grow the number of museum visitors. As an international student, I have to work 20 hours per week. I will be available from Saturday to Wednesday from 9-5 pm. I would be happy to hear from you.

Also

, you may find my C.V attached to

this

letter. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you needed anything more. Yours Sincerely Mohammad Lesani

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

210 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
Organization
Team player
Flexible
Reliable
Positive attitude
Availability
Professional goals
Community contribution
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